January 30, 2010
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Virginity
The sweetest taste
Is very first…Drawn out
Long
Heavy
Heady with intention
Hands grasping
Pushing
Summer heat sneaking through the window
Breath, memory collide
And then it’s overYou live in this moment
Waiting for the change to come
It doesn’t
And you simply wonder what you were missing before(27. Something about sex without ever mentioning the actual act or vocabulary of sex. Page Dr. Freud if you have to. Heh. Mode of creation open- ( 5 pts), 20. Something with Virginity as a theme- mode of creation open- ( 3 pts))
Comments (13)
Ah, Freud. Sometimes a banana is just a banana. I did find a circumcised carrot once though…
Great job!
@Manstration - LOL
Nice. Definitely fulfilled your requirements on this one.
@Manstration - A circumcised carrot. Hm
Well written.
Very nice!
Lovely creative job with this one hun …happy sunday to you !
Wow, that was amazing
@Manstration - LOL!
@Vignettery - @WakeUpLaughing - Thanks for the recs!
@ccarothers - @stixandstonz2009 -@American_woman_USA - @allmyquandaries - Thanks!
@Scrooge0 - Being snowed in will do that …. lol.
Bow chikka wow wow!
You’d have a good future with romance novels.
@SoullFire - I’ll quit my day job
Hey, how about those Saints !? –BTB